Here is something that I just created. Any ideas on how to improve it?

i like it but if you make the lighting much more warm anb by candles it will add to the feel of the scene just a suggestion though ok

Well, hmm... I thank I can come up with a couple of ideas. 1. The toilet is a bit out of scale. (either that, or the woman's a munchkin) 2. These woman seem to be a "paler shade of white". I'm not sure if it's lack of textures, or the color of your lighting, but you need to do something to make them a little less ghoulish. 3. You've got your lens aperture set to small. It makes the tiling on the floor look weird. I'd suggest going up to 50mm and pulling the camera father back. -SMT

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