Forum: Photography


Subject: Final abstraction...

doruksal opened this issue on Aug 12, 2001 ยท 6 posts


doruksal posted Sun, 12 August 2001 at 2:16 AM

...from the "famous building" that I was addicted to shoot. It's Sunday morning, 10:15 o'clock, my connection is superb, and I'm able to send this image to "Forum" with a delay of 1-1.5 days. Technical details are the same as my recent posts... Have a nice Sunday...

doruksal posted Sun, 12 August 2001 at 11:28 PM

Actually, I didn't get your idea clearly, but I'm curious to see how it's gonna work. So, feel free to experiment. Thanx... :)


bsteph2069 posted Mon, 13 August 2001 at 5:41 AM

I think Alpha feels distorted because of the tangle of lines. There are several curving lines curving in the same direction but at the same time there are vertical lines and essentially a > sign with the the wider steps. Interesting. It's probably making some unconscious optical illusion. Bsteph


Antoonio posted Tue, 14 August 2001 at 5:57 AM

Hmmm, to tell the truth, I dont like this as much as I like those previous ones. Its a nice pic still. .n


doruksal posted Tue, 14 August 2001 at 3:04 PM

Actually, I have to admit that I find this image to be the least successful one among the photgraphic images that I've posted. This image seems to be problematic somehow, and, in my opinion, the problem lies primarily in my cropping of the image. I remember performing crops as tight as Alpha did, but didn't like them during the process. I was feeling as if I was loosing too much image area and many elements. Still, seeing Alpha'a version, not during the process but in a sudden way, shows me that tight crops may work very finely, and that I was including some unnecessary elements in my image, like the lower right bright area with two perpendicular lines. So, a lesson for myself: do your crops, even if you don't like the outcomes first...then save them...then, after a while, re-evaluate them on their own... :)


doruksal posted Tue, 14 August 2001 at 4:01 PM

Dear Alpha, here are my comments... 1- Your cropping and composition is far better, being more balanced and eliminating some really distracting elements. 2- While rendering my image, it was actually something like this golden-yellow hue you achieved that I was trying to get. In fact, the colors of my image are quite better than the colors of the source photo but, they seem to be more reddish and desaturated now. 3- [They have constructed the railings wrong..! :)] I now get what you mean by "conflicting lines": the two right-most railing support bars in the foreground seem to be inclining leftwards, while it seems they have to be standing vertical. Still, the photo was taken quite close to stairs, looking slightly upwards (possibly a fine 20-30 degrees in respect to the floor), and with a 35 mm lens (Rolei B-35), and I think such conditions may create a perspective that, the vertical lines to the right and the left of the middle may seem to be slightly converging towards a focal point up above (Notice that, the two left-most vertical railing support bars seem to be slightly inclining to the right). On closer look, I get that though the "skew" process has rendered the "vertical" bars to be more satisfyingly vertical, this time the upper "vertical" window lines seem to have parted away from each other. 4- I am not offended by any means :). On the contrary, I'm honored that you spent some time on my work and shared your opinions and techniques with me. I'm learning PSP and Photoshop just for 7-10 days, and, due to work, I do not have much time to practice a lot... And this discussion gave me a lot of tips. 5- I'm thankful... C'ya... :)