Sihn opened this issue on Aug 27, 2001 ยท 5 posts
Sihn posted Mon, 27 August 2001 at 5:36 PM
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I seem to be stuck on what this scene needs. Anyone care to make suggestions?
Jackson posted Mon, 27 August 2001 at 6:39 PM
Here's some: (IMHO) 1. Move the girl off-center (I been readin' up on composition). 2. Maybe something in the distant background? A lone tree or something? 3. What is that next to her? If it's water, it probably shouldn't have a shadow. 4. The position of the hand resting on the leg doesn't look natural. Question: What is she looking at? Should the audience be able to see it? Well, maybe not. That's it. Nice pic.
AgentSmith posted Mon, 27 August 2001 at 6:53 PM
Looks like the girl should have the same water material applied to her as the ocean, as if she should also be made of water.
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jmahoney posted Mon, 27 August 2001 at 8:10 PM
If it's a small stream next to her, it should have a source. She seems to be sitting on a rock that's higher than it's surroundings, so it's confusing where the waters comming from. Perhaps a spring comming up from the rock? Looks good so far!
Phantast posted Tue, 28 August 2001 at 6:36 AM
The shadow on the water is actually a reflection of the shadow on the rock, so that's OK. The problem is the lighting on the figure is too flat; not enough contrast between light and shade. Perhaps the ambience is too high?