-Comments welcome- -Gabe-

I like the facial expression. But she looks like she's scratching an itchy foot.

Good photo but I have one recommendation. Tell me if I'm wrong. It seems as though some of the poses are very "planned" and seem like they have been held awhile. You wouldn't think you'd be able to tell, but it definitely shows in this one. Try to use a faster shutter speed and capture your model when they aren't expecting it. Maybe when she's getting into pose position instead of after pose position. Tell a joke and shoot her reaction. Ask a thought-provoking question and quickly shoot her mid-thought. Am I right about the "overposed" look and do you think these suggestions might help? -Andrew

Andrew, that's really funny because she was as Star said scratching her foot and wasn't paying atentin to me... so I guess I don't know... but That's also the way it goes sometines. I know that she was "Practicing" Poses and expressions in the mirror all week, so she was a bit stiff at the beginning of the shoot, but That comes in time. I am looking forward to working with her allot more, because the more I work with her the more potential I see. Gabe-

I think she's putting too much thought in scratching. That must be some nasty itch LOL... (*