Jon opened this issue on Dec 08, 1999 ยท 4 posts
Jon posted Wed, 08 December 1999 at 7:09 AM
FishNose posted Wed, 08 December 1999 at 4:34 PM
Hey Jon - Nice try! Druuna's one of my favourites - Serpieri's style is fascinating, total control, beautiful roundness and volume, a style reminiscent of a really competent etcher. Got all his books. Of course, you need to muss up her hair a bit more - clever use of the Betty Page hair - Hellborn I think? Druuna almost never stands on her toes. Put her flatter on the deck. Also, your babe is actually too 'pretty' - Druuna is more handsome than pretty, a very strong face. More thigh and especially muscle round the back of the leg is a good idea. All this sounds terrible, but you DID ask! It's not at all as bad as it sounds. Actually I like your image a lot. Do more of this! :]FishNose
Jon posted Wed, 08 December 1999 at 5:52 PM
Thanks FishNose. Constructive criticism is what I'm after and it helps to get a different perspective. I'm not too happy with the face either, but if you noticed Serpieri works from human models and it's not always the same one. This version of Druuna was based on Morbus Gravis 2. If you take a look at some later work, she is very different. Sorry I didn't mention credits but I'm not sure how it's going to turn out finally. For this pic: Texture - Anton's Paulina shoes by Jackie hair is from Colm's Amazon Anna thong from Nerd's Taarna Glad you like, cause I do plan on making more.
FishNose posted Thu, 09 December 1999 at 4:53 AM
And Jon.... make her as naughty as the original Druuna, and put her in the Adult Gallery! :]FishNose