Forum: Carrara


Subject: Coffee and a Donut WIP

dethblud opened this issue on Mar 19, 2002 ยท 3 posts


dethblud posted Tue, 19 March 2002 at 2:47 AM

I don't post in this forum very often, but I decided to jump in on the coffee and a donut contest. Here's what I'm working on.

twillis posted Tue, 19 March 2002 at 7:21 AM

Wow. Great textures on the mug and the "sweetners". The napkin is great, too. Might try making the smoke more twisty or drifty, and maybe the puddle at the bottom of the spoon is too regular, but those are just minor nit pics.


AzChip posted Wed, 20 March 2002 at 6:11 PM

I LOVE the Denny's cup; particularly the stain. I'd also suggest randomizing your sprinkles a bit more on the doughnut; it seems to be a pattern repeating every 15 or 20 degrees. Maybe put some schmutz in the bottom of the ash-tray, too. Looks a little clean. I think I've sat in that horrible green pleather seat, before. (I've been to one too many Denny's in my day....) I love this forum, by the way; even for contests we feel free to post for advice from one another. Just another indication that we're all here to improve our art and help each other.