stringburner6 opened this issue on Mar 19, 2002 ยท 7 posts
stringburner6 posted Tue, 19 March 2002 at 9:15 PM
airflamesred posted Wed, 20 March 2002 at 12:40 AM
dont use bryce classic terrains - its a dead give away - not bad for first attempt though
TheWingedOne posted Wed, 20 March 2002 at 4:54 AM
I'd soften the pikes a little using the terrain editor. Be welcome as a new member to the community of 3d art creators :)
Sipapu posted Wed, 20 March 2002 at 6:27 AM
Very nice job with the cove itself. I'd change the horizon so that it isn't cutting straight through the middle of the scene. Someone else who's new to Bryce recently asked for a critique. There were some great responses that would generally apply. Take a look through the threads for the last week, and I think you'll find it. Welcome here from someone else who's only one or two steps ahead of you.
lindans posted Wed, 20 March 2002 at 9:12 AM
I love the colours and the cove but the terrain could use a bit of editing, Keep playing, I promise you you'll get hooked. Plenty of help available on this site.
Oh, let the sun beat down upon my face. I am a traveler of both time and space ....Kashmir, Led Zeppelin
Chrisdmd posted Wed, 20 March 2002 at 1:48 PM
Stringburner6, I agree with a lot of the comments above, especially with regards to the "default type' terrains, but let me say that you have a great artistic eye. The scene definitely captures a moment and feeling and that is hard to teach...great job! The rest is just experience with Bryce and playing around...you're off to a great start and I can't wait to see more of your work! Chris (Bryce newbie) PS: Welcome to a great group
alexants posted Fri, 22 March 2002 at 1:33 PM
Try tinkering with your sun controls in the Sky Lab. You can adjust the bearing and azimuth to an almost infinite degree, so it's just peeking over the horizon... this is a great pic! Peter Sharpe has a great little Sun and Moon tutorial on his website, petersharpe.com