Seravajan opened this issue on Mar 29, 2002 ยท 5 posts
Seravajan posted Fri, 29 March 2002 at 2:23 PM
SAMS3D posted Fri, 29 March 2002 at 2:41 PM
Looks great, love the water and the small ripples in it. Sharen
jnmoore posted Fri, 29 March 2002 at 2:44 PM
Looks nice, but the scale seems disproportionate from the character to the trees (ie the trees are a bit small). Also, should the ground cover (grass, or whatever it is) go right to the water line?
ChuckEvans posted Fri, 29 March 2002 at 2:56 PM
I see you took some advice from your earlier pic...used reflections in the water. Not sure how you are doing this...heck, I don't have much time to do any work myself, lately...but it looks like the shadow from the rock is going a different direction from the shadow on the figure. As far as I'm concerned, art being in the eye of the beholder always, to each his own, etc., I'd like to see the character brightened up a bit. For someone throwing a shadow that strong, you'd think she'd stand out a little more. As, I'm assuming, the center of attention, she should be a bit brighter, or less drab than her the surroundings. But, remember, it's just an artistic opinion. Keep going, Ser. I see you are eager to learn!
aleks posted Fri, 29 March 2002 at 3:32 PM
the sun is, judging from the moon's shadow on the right side, pretty low on horizon. the overall light should be more reddish and hazy. her shadow is, following same logic, wrong. i would lighten her up a bit.