FWTempest opened this issue on Apr 19, 2002 ยท 10 posts
FWTempest posted Fri, 19 April 2002 at 10:22 AM
FWTempest posted Fri, 19 April 2002 at 10:46 AM
okay... just re-read all FAQ's I could find and found my answer... so please disregard the question and regard the artwork. :o)
yrtrouble2 posted Fri, 19 April 2002 at 12:52 PM
I really like the lighting and composition! I think you did a great job!
TaltosVT posted Fri, 19 April 2002 at 1:02 PM
Awesome reflection on the floor. Remdinds me of the dance studio where my daughter practices (she always slips and falls down if she forgets her ballet slippers).
AgentSmith posted Fri, 19 April 2002 at 3:12 PM
Yup, EXCELLENT execution of glossy floor, tinted glass/mirror, and window in the background.
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Nukeboy posted Fri, 19 April 2002 at 9:34 PM
The answer is (as you already have proven) Practice! Practice! Practice!
Well done!
ariannah posted Fri, 19 April 2002 at 10:23 PM
Niiice job Tempest!
As a former professional dancer, I can tell you this brought back many memories. You really captured the essence quite well and I especially like your overall composition! :-)
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bikermouse posted Sat, 20 April 2002 at 2:49 AM
exellent use of darkness to add mystery. from post above you can tell the importance of leaving something to the imagination. in full light we might have been nitpicking at the pose etc. the sun peeking through is a nice touch. but since you probably want some criticism here's mine. I can't put my finger on it but the way the sunlight ends suddenly on the right and bottom seems odd. "exellent" - as stated by "Monty Burns" on "The Simpsons" -o.k. BYE
FWTempest posted Sat, 20 April 2002 at 7:54 AM
mouse, I agree... I think it was due to the placement of the light and the bars in the window, but try as I might I couldn't find any other arrangement that highlighted the dancer the way I wanted, so I left it alone... or I'd have been fiddling with it forever. Thanks all for the encouraging comments. Ya'll just ensured that there will be more to follow. :o)
bikermouse posted Mon, 22 April 2002 at 5:52 AM
maybe you could tweek the sun position ever so slightly. i know there is a way to be able to manipulate the sun numerically,but i don't remember how to do it right now(i think you just click on the sun...). - o.k. BYE