This is a piece I am working on. A Little backgrouind info. In folklore there is a kelitc water spirit called a Kelpie that usulaly takes the form of a horse. It is known to run off with young maidens by tempting them to mount and then magically gluing them to its back and running away to eat them (probably a euphemism because the kelpies are invariably male). There is another legend that says the Kelpie can be tamed if you can get a bridle on them (usually a magical golden one). So this work is entitled "Beware" and you are supposed to wonder if the girl should beware the Kelpie or visa versa. Anyway, I'm not entirely please with this and would love comments and suggestions on how to improve it. Daio