Ravenism opened this issue on Jun 03, 2002 ยท 3 posts
Ravenism posted Mon, 03 June 2002 at 7:55 PM
Attached Link: Week 2
Black Orchid week 2 is up and ready to be viewed. Still trying to perfect everything.. lighting.. shadows..etc. But time will show just how much better it can get :)
Huolong posted Mon, 03 June 2002 at 10:50 PM
Excess verbiage placed externally to image ... images fine and should tell story with absolute minium number of words as a part of the art.
Gordon
bikermouse posted Tue, 04 June 2002 at 5:18 AM
Yeah, too wordy.(too many words or explainations bore the reader. and show a lack of confidence by the artist that the picture will convey the story.) 
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