Forum: Bryce

Subject: feedback on this image

Moonstone opened this issue on Jul 22, 2002 ยท 9 posts

Moonstone posted Mon, 22 July 2002 at 1:01 PM

Would love to hear any comments on this image, I am still new to Bryce and is still learning new things everyday. I have been at the bryce for 15 days and is going to try and do different images to see what I can come up with in bryce.

SAMS3D posted Mon, 22 July 2002 at 1:26 PM

Looks great, maybe a few books or nick nacks on the shelves but very interesting....Sharen

Adorien posted Mon, 22 July 2002 at 4:01 PM

I think it looks very nice, you did a good job. Keep up the good work =)..Athena

derjimi posted Mon, 22 July 2002 at 4:14 PM

Cool work. You asked for honest suggestions - here we go: - The window needs some frame. Every window has a frame - some wood would be nice. - the white light from the door looks some kind of unreal. Probably reduce the light behind the door so it's not so white. - the walls and the shelf need some stuff - put a painting or something on the wall and probably some books in the shelf and it looks nicer. - probably something on the tables? Flowers? A vase? Don't know. That's it. ;-) BUT (!) I've to say something: don't be mad with me about my words. For using Bryce for 15 days you did a WONDERFUL work. Keep it up! Take care, Jimi

ICMgraphics posted Mon, 22 July 2002 at 4:30 PM

Great color combos, nice reflective effect, well thought out composition,so far...hehe..now here's where I get ya, MORE STUFF!! No Really, Great job. Enjoy Rod

cobalt posted Mon, 22 July 2002 at 4:38 PM

Something I might add, along with Jimi's good suggestions: camera angle. As it is, you've got a very flat and non-exciting angle on the room. You may want to try more of a 3/4 view - play around with camera position.

Willowjune posted Mon, 22 July 2002 at 10:50 PM

I'm new to Bryce too. Good job! How did you do the book?

Moonstone posted Tue, 23 July 2002 at 9:14 AM

Guys, Thanks for the feedback and I am going to add some more to this image this one is just a rough draft and is trying to work on adding some stuff to it. Honesty is greatly appreciated, Jimi, thanks for your input. Willowjune, I got the book from the freebies and the sites has great 3d images that you can download from and use them in your image if needed, same goes for the couch. Right now I am working on creating my own couch because I wanted my image to be totally my own designs as possible which could be hard but what is fun in the easy way out. Challenging is the best way to learn. I will post the image after working in it some more in a few days! :)

bikermouse posted Thu, 25 July 2002 at 2:16 AM

You might want to check Peter Sharpe's tutorials on lighting at http://www.petersharpe.com. It would help with the light through the windows.