Another that I wasn't sure on which i liked better.

I loke the liteness of this one but I also like the other one

Theese were boath 1/2/ stop apart

Second one for me. (*

Me also, the face looks a little tpp p[ale in the first xXxXx

second one.... i've the sensation that her feeble points are the hands. in this shot too i don't like the way sehe poses her hands. She has long hands, like the hands of a piano player. are an important part of her body. i've the sensation she doesn't realize how to pose 'em armonically.

Star & cat, I think your right on. Artax, you are 100 pecent right, I have known her for 6 or so months, but was away from her for about three of them, and I must say she has come along way very quickly, her hands and her expretions still need work however. She has been working on her body langage and I think she has that down so I'm going to focus her on specifics like her eyes swinting, and hand placement, and posture... She ganes an inch if she doesn't slouch... If you have any other coments, or ideas you think she should work on then please let me know it would be well apreciated. I think she will do very well in this industry, in the near future, but her presentation still needs alot of refignments and she needs to mature a little bit more before she gets there. Thanks, -Gabe-

Looking at this from a composition point of view your subject has a lamp post coming straight out of the top of her head I like the pose but again she has the long sulking expression on her face. :O)

Those who do not want to imitate anything, produce nothing. Salvador Dali