CocaColafreek opened this issue on Aug 31, 2002 ยท 11 posts
CocaColafreek posted Sat, 31 August 2002 at 6:59 PM
CocaColafreek posted Sat, 31 August 2002 at 7:03 PM
the hair loks really dark...darker than i painted it..
Little_Dragon posted Sat, 31 August 2002 at 7:52 PM
The folds in the fabric are nicely executed. The hair looks okay, also, except for a few odd bends in some strands. But the painted elements appear a bit flat and dimensionless to me. If that wasn't the look you were going for, I'd suggest some highlights.
CocaColafreek posted Sat, 31 August 2002 at 8:15 PM
odeathoflife posted Sat, 31 August 2002 at 8:17 PM
Looks good but the lines at the edges really need some work, they blur out rather then chop off :) Great job though/
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Little_Dragon posted Sat, 31 August 2002 at 8:29 PM
A definite improvement! I thought about mentioning the blurring earlier, but decided you might be going for a focal-blur or depth-of-field effect.
CocaColafreek posted Sat, 31 August 2002 at 8:33 PM
odeathoflife posted Sat, 31 August 2002 at 8:42 PM
That look a lot better, now for some subtle shadows under the clothes :) Really though it is much better at my attempt to 'post paint"
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Little_Dragon posted Sat, 31 August 2002 at 8:47 PM
bikermouse posted Sun, 01 September 2002 at 1:00 PM
CocaColafreak, I'd turn the light down a little, it'd probably look even better.(and I'd match the lipstick more closely to the dress(don't match them exactly to the dress nor to each other) - somehow bluegray doesn't seem to be her color.) All in all a good job, - TJ
Blitter posted Tue, 03 September 2002 at 1:05 PM
Most realistic thing you can add -- shadows. Clothing casts shadow too of course and really make the hand drawn elements more believable. Take a look at a photo, and see how the clothes not only cast shadow on the body, but the places where the cloth are tight on the body (e.g., around waist, etc) usually have an indentation where there is signficant shadow lines. Also, some detail on the skirt would help -- like a line around the top (e.g. a seam or something). Otherwise - nice job!