Forum: Writers


Subject: Poem, please be kind

Feendrache opened this issue on Sep 25, 2002 ยท 13 posts


Feendrache posted Wed, 25 September 2002 at 4:10 AM

Ok, phuh, i'm tryin to stay calm, this is the first time i show one of my english-written poems to more people than just my clostest friends. Please give comments. Deep inside our soul, there lies a sleepin star, dreaming, waiting, hoping, till the day so far When the star is waking and becomes a light, shining on our way to the land of flight. There the souls wings spread, glittering in gold, and without regret leave behind the old. Through winds and storms of whishes will the flight go on with feelings so delicious, wherever they belong. No one knows his way, no one dares to guess, the flight is our hope, he can damn and he can bless. What do you feel inside your heart? Can you tell me? Make a start ... Nadine