I get no comments in the art galleries so I post it here. What do you think. poser and bryse vicky Black shirt Vicky's Euro wear Vicky's JeansZ. Las Vegas Hair. TMC-Stone-Arch. Newspaper from TrekkieGrrrl Comments are welcome Tanks for viewing

Nice composition, the finish is a bit grainy for my taste. That's my kinda fall season foliage. ;)

when leaves are bigger than people I begin to worry

I like the uneven rounded curb, to many times people use sharp edge objects for models, and it really takes away from the realism. I like the crumpled news paper, only the text is to dark. The foreground leaf effect is really great, showing wind, and perspective, but the perspective effect is lost because the leaves behind her are to big. just my 2 cents

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I like the vigenette quality to it. I understand the size of the foreground leaves, if you have any kind of 2d editing program, you could slightly blur those leaves to help show they are far in the foreground. The leaves being large in the background though leads the eye to believe your objects are out of scale, perhaps making them smaller and having them look as if they are falling off the tree?

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passenger, Is it just me or is there something odd about her left hand? Speaking of scale the bricks of the building seem to be as large as cynderblocks. and the leaves behind her(she cuts some of them off) on the right(her left) do seem too large. other than that I agree with ICMgraphics. - TJ

Look's like she's ready to kick some butt! Reeaally like the bricks on the wall...her right hand looks weird, left one is slightly big, but I like the overall look... Zhann

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Shrink the leaves behind the poser model. Good composition.