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Subject: March Contest Entry II - "Bard Closeup"

FALCON2 opened this issue on Mar 30, 2000 · 4 posts

FALCON2 posted Thu, 30 March 2000 at 1:40 AM

The Bard -- Closeup She listens raptly as the storyteller finishes, waiting for her chance to play. Rendered in Vue3 Ren Garb Pack 1 by Traveller P4EVO figure Enjoy! Falcon

shadownet posted Thu, 30 March 2000 at 9:56 AM

Nicely done. Love her expression. Rob

CharlieBrown posted Fri, 31 March 2000 at 11:46 AM

I like the detail on this, but I think you might want to darken the highlights on her flesh; she looks like a well-crafted plastic mannequin!

Cris_Palomino posted Sun, 02 April 2000 at 3:16 PM

I really like this one. Charlie Brown's comments on the highlights can be worked on, but just to bring a little unity to the piece, I would would throw some of that wonderful orange warmth on the harp to the Bard's flesh. The only other thing I would have done was to drape her other hand around to the front of the harp at the bottom...it would complete the circular motion of the compostition.