FWTempest opened this issue on Oct 13, 2002 ยท 24 posts
FWTempest posted Sun, 13 October 2002 at 5:15 PM
Willowjune posted Sun, 13 October 2002 at 6:39 PM
Very nice! I'd wondered about using terrains as grass--turned out great!
lsstrout posted Sun, 13 October 2002 at 6:52 PM
I like this angle and the subdued colors. I can almost see people filling up the stands and the football teams forming up on the field. Lin
AgentSmith posted Sun, 13 October 2002 at 7:03 PM
Lol...oh this is great! I only laugh a little because the windmill and water tower in the back remind me of high school in Illinois. (And, I was a tight end in football) Thanks for the memories. AgentSmith
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cshaftoe posted Sun, 13 October 2002 at 7:04 PM
Just excellent! The Bryster
Roch222 posted Sun, 13 October 2002 at 7:09 PM
Outstanding!! - Very Realistic & Great Details Roch222
ICMgraphics posted Sun, 13 October 2002 at 7:48 PM
Great Scene. Lived that one.
Aldaron posted Sun, 13 October 2002 at 8:43 PM
Beautiful, very realistic. Glad I didn't enter this challenge. :)
Trouble posted Sun, 13 October 2002 at 8:44 PM
Great job on the grass!!
FWTempest posted Sun, 13 October 2002 at 11:33 PM
Thank you all for the comments. I've been reminiscing a lot lately because my oldest nephew is playing junior high football this season on the same field that I played on when growing up, which also looks a bit like this one. BTW, AgentSmith, I played defensive tackle in H.S. and college.
johnpenn posted Sun, 13 October 2002 at 11:52 PM
Wow. That rocks. The only thing I'd do differently is get rid of the birds. There are just too many birds in CG. Actually, I can imagine birds lurking over a field for the dropped fry, or whatever. But still, why do people put birds in every movie with CG? Killer pic though. It really goes above and beyond.
FWTempest posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 12:30 AM
lol... thanks... I needed something to break up that large expanse of sky. The birds are actually over the farm in the background. The mosquitos, flies and gnats that are there in reality didn't show up to good here, so I left the birds. :o)
Rayraz posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 3:01 AM
Nice looking entry you've got there. The grass is very nice in the distance, but it misses something when it's close to the camera. I can't figure out what the close-up grass it needs exactly, but it needs to look a bit more realistic. I like the birds.
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cshaftoe posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 4:03 AM
Ray: Does the grass need to be greener? The Bryster
FWTempest posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 4:58 AM
I think the 'problem' may be the unnatural uniformity that is bound to occur when using this technique to create grass. Every 'blade' of grass is going to be pointing in exactly the same direction... straight up. I attempted to soften this with a bit of painting in the foreground, but was afraid of over-doing it... I'm still getting used to using Painter and Photoshop with my new Wacom tablet. Also, I think a few fluffy dandelions scattered about would've added a little more realism to the scene... but I didn't think of that until after I posted this. Might change it, but, again I worry about over-working just about everything I do.
Rayraz posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 10:54 AM
The grass in the foreground needs to be just a bit greener I think. (thanx cshaftoe) and maybe it could use a bit more contrast. And I think the fact that all the grass is pointing up doesn't help to much either. I think it's these little tiny things that make it look not as perfect as it could have been. Maybe you can use imported grass-objects in the foreground and keep the terrains in the background. If it's overworked you'll hear it from people (especially when you ask if you've overdone it). If this version turns out to be the best one you can always ask/tell AgentSmith to use this version for the challenge when it's voting time.
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Rayraz posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 10:55 AM
Don't get me wrong. I already like the image a lot. :)
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FWTempest posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 11:27 AM
cool... thanks for the advice. I'll definitely keep it in mind. We've still got a couple of weeks to go. Maybe something I think is just a little better will work itself out between now and then... :o)
FWTempest posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 11:31 AM
I'll see if I can do something with 'greener', without taking away from the faded photo/memory kind of feeling that I've got going with the subdued colors. :o)
bikermouse posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 11:55 AM
By Jove! I think you've got it!
Battleangel21 posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 1:09 PM
amazing really really excellent work
Colette1 posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 2:11 PM
This is really good. Takes me back to high school. From my view point in the stands, I thought all FB players were tight ends? :)
mboncher posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 2:11 PM
Oh... you goober. :c) That rendering's gonna be tough to beat. Great concept and work.
derjimi posted Wed, 16 October 2002 at 7:53 AM
This is an excellent challenge entry. Very nice POV and the gras is awesome. Greets, Jimi