Forum: Bryce

Subject: October Monthly Challenge - A walk in the park - modified

catlin_mc opened this issue on Oct 14, 2002 · 9 posts

catlin_mc posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 11:29 AM

OK, I took everyones advice into consideration and have fixed two points that were mentioned: 1. the park bench is now an appropriate size for the suroundings. 2. more of the root ball is showing in the big tree. Please let me know what you all think.......improvement ? Catlin

Gretzky75 posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 11:49 AM

all I can see is maybe do something to the edges of the sidewalk or change the texture of the sidewalk, it looks pretty good how it is though

Aldaron posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 12:13 PM

Looks great!

lsstrout posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 1:14 PM

Those extra touches made a nice picture look even better. Lin

big_hoovie posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 1:27 PM

just a little thing: if the sidewalk is gravel, or pea stone, there whould probably be some grass or weeds poking through(either that, or this park has really good grounds keepers) other than that, it looks great!

FWTempest posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 2:18 PM

looks much better to me... I like it.

cshaftoe posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 2:57 PM

I like the way the grassed area seem to fall away from the path. Glad my suggestion helped. Don't change a thing. The Bryster

tuttle posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 3:23 PM

Damn, that bench is HUGE!!! ;) I'm just kidding! Honestly! ducks Great pic. You've done well to get the sense of distance and the lighting is good too.

catlin_mc posted Mon, 14 October 2002 at 5:05 PM

A big thank you to all for your input and encouragement. To big_hoovie - Here's the reason the paths are clear of weeds. Grounds keeper Willie keeps the paths clear in this park and he, "widnay allow a wee bit oh grass to grou own his paths". (if you say it as it's written with a grounds keeper Willie accent, it should sound almost Scottish) Och, eye, the noo................as we say in Scotland. ;) Catlin