Forum: Bryce


Subject: Feedback request for WIP (?)

eelie opened this issue on Nov 25, 2002 ยท 24 posts


eelie posted Mon, 25 November 2002 at 5:44 PM

I was wondering if I could get some feedback on this. I'm sort of stuck with it, wondering if I should add something else, or stay where I am. I'm calling this "Ocean Replenished" and instinct says it's good as is, but I also have the urge to add something. I've thought about adding a masted sailing ship, the premise of that being on a voyage this field of spheres is discovered. Problem with that is a ship is outside my capabilities yet. The other thing I've thought about is some other-worldly flying things flitting around the spheres but that doesn't seem quite right. Does anyone have any ideas? I'd really appreciate the input! :o) Thanks! Susan