jacoggins opened this issue on Nov 29, 2002 ยท 9 posts
jacoggins posted Fri, 29 November 2002 at 5:50 PM
cynlee posted Fri, 29 November 2002 at 7:02 PM
Always good shooting at the mall- hmmm- imo- I guess I'd lasso the 3 dolls & cut & paste as a new image, then decide on a background or just clone out the top left corner (price tag & dreamcatcher) & blend- I'd be interested to see what others have to say too-
Michelle A. posted Fri, 29 November 2002 at 7:02 PM
Hmmm.....I keep coming back and looking at this....and I really think it's the fact that the DOF is so deep that it really distracts from the doll in the foreground. Also my eye wants to see more of the the main subject so I think you cropped the lower right to tightly in camera. Don't take this the wrong way....I like this image.... I'm not sure how you could crop it now to get a better composition...of course you could blur up the background a bit if you wanted....I don't know....all just IMHO.
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didgeriddo posted Fri, 29 November 2002 at 8:56 PM
Personally I really like this image, but I have to go along with Michelle for the DOF aspect of it. That doll is crying out for some little girl to come along and take her home. Not sure how to explain how I would do it. Would be easier to show for me. But not sure that is okay to do here. Being this is my first post here.
ChuckEvans posted Fri, 29 November 2002 at 9:40 PM
tasquah posted Thu, 05 December 2002 at 2:58 AM
jacoggins posted Thu, 05 December 2002 at 2:16 PM
that works, thanks tasquah, I'm always open to suggestions! Jack
mysnapz posted Thu, 05 December 2002 at 4:01 PM
Works for me to Tasquah, taking the focus off the background and back on the subject. Might just tone down the background hi lights and stop them competing with the dolls face. :O)
Those who do not want to imitate anything, produce nothing. Salvador Dali
tasquah posted Fri, 06 December 2002 at 1:27 AM
Mysnaps : yep , good point now that you mention it I see what you mean .