"The Portrait" by Loopydee1
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Description
My first attempt at trying to create a Portrait image.
Thanks for looking.
Dee
Comments (3)
rixster
Pretty damn good for a first attempt - AA++
RGUS
I think you have capture a very sexy lady with excellent light and great expression in this image, you should do more portraits... you have a way with faces here that a few artists would love to capture... thank-you for sharing this wonderful image with us, after 130 viewings you must have nade more people than me very happy to have viewed it... EXCELLENT!!!! (BIG VOTE)
clifftoppler
Four months have passed, so you must be distanced, and I able to comment freely without hurting (hopefully). The composition is splendid, the hair nice, and everything natural - apart from those eyes. firstly the highlights they are not bad, but I would quieten or even remove the pair to the extreme right in the right eye. Secondly, I would make the black centre (Lens?) larger, for the iris is likely to be open in the presumed dim lighting conditions. The study of colour photographic portraits would help build up your knowledge bank (if it needs building up, of course). Having said all that, your eyes show better than many to be seen uploaded. I hope this is helpful for knit picking when you have done so amazing well with an early portrait is otherwise vastly unfair. The picture represents a terrific achievement but the other two commentators have dwelt on that. Kind regards, Cliff.