hmm, the idea is not so special. the figure needs more work. looks all so artifical, look on the feathers of the wings. like made of fucking steel not feathers. nothing against u and ur work, but the problem is: all looks like from big construction set. here a figure, there some wings, add a nice texture and ready is! i miss a unique idea, something where i can see u made it by urself! u know what i mean? but thats not a problem of u, its a problem the most artists of computer-generated pictures have! hope i could help u. im interestet in ur reaction on my comment, so plz send me a message! dont post here, because i wouldnt find ur picture again. lars :)

The unity of using all the same color can be both good and bad. You need to be careful that you're working towards one effect with the color, if you know what I mean. Also, personally, I think the orb in the center is a bit too big. I would put it smaller (think soccer ball size in proportion to the figure) and centered right around the breast. Finally, although the texture on the figure adds mood to the picture, it also takes away expression. You may want to consider using different textures on different parts of the body (not easy in many cases, granted) so that you can achieve both the mood you want and expression. Anyway, hope this helps. I'm not all that great myself, but if you have any questions, send me a message. Good luck :)