"Help me 2 improve" Oct.28 by 04sfz3
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Yes ! Another update ! I've changed the floor (now in relief !) the wall's texture, I'd to improve the roof's appearence... What did you think I can make ?
Comments (5)
dastardly
A sorcerer, what else? btw according to me, your beautiful floor doesn't match with your beautiful columns, try sth else, but the image is still cool!
djthomas
I agree with dastardly here... the floor looks great---it is what caught my eye right away, but the columns don't seem to fit the same style as the floor and arches--perhaps something more in the doric form would come closer to matching the overall look. The specularity seems too high on the columns creating too much of a polished appearance. Finally, without knowing what scale you are working to, the columns seem quite close together.
Slash15
agree with djthomas - the columns look too polished. Apart from that maybe make it dark with torches from the columns and instead of the centre column u could have a fountain or something of light and dastardly's sorcerer somewhere around it. Just a few ideas but keep going...it's looking good.
04sfz3
Ok ok... I gona changete arches and make them less heavy...
flowmaster
Columns are appropriately spaced if you are modeling certain very old architectures. Add more shadow and texturing, especially in background, add some dirt. If you are using a global light, get rid of it.