I'm the short, hairy one in this picture--not the one with his tongue sticking out: The one with the hat! Next to me is my Aunt Morghan and my "child," Othila, who died in August 2005.We were living in a town so small (Harper, Texas), the Post Office didn't deliver to our downtown address! I wasn't born in Texas, and I'm leaving as soon as I can! My aunt got married last Summer and moved; I moved to a town so small that I haven't seen it yet: Crabapple, Texas. I work and shop in Fredericksburg.BIOMy background includes pride and shame, like most of us. I did inhale, but I don't, and I didn't dodge. Nor did I do it and say it wasn't It. And I most definitely did not invade small countries to keep the country from seeing how dumb I am. I have strong opinions, but I love everybody: Even the wee folk. I believe that if an extra-terrestrial were to look at Earth, Je'd think, "Look! They operate machinery they don't have the skill to manage, and it causes thousands, millions, of deaths every day! See? Those bodies just laying in the road? No compassion!" And that would be just the deer... :)
In my writing, you might meet some of these extra-terrestrials. You'll get a chance to see how humanity SHOULD handle space, and a glimpse of, not Star Trek(tm), but an objective, non-human view of our entry into the galactic community.
Let me cheat here, and introduce my current main project. Humanity reaches for the stars, and finds pain and pleasure. In our own Solar System we discover competition for what we had thought were unclaimed resources beyond the outer planets: Insect-like creatures are nesting in the Kuiper Belt, using the resources they find to build their space craft. We are also offered a helping hand from the Galactic Community (GC): A mostly enlightened, but in many ways still very human, alliance of species who have the technology for space flight, and perhaps a few who dont bother with the technology. With their assistance, mankind is ready to travel the Galaxy.
One man triggers our meeting the Galactic Community, but its up to others to defend humanity from an even more powerful threat; an inter-dimensional threat that has already conquered wiser peoples than us, and is groping our way.
Earth technology and training brought us to the stars, and into the Galactic Community. This changing world -- galaxy -- is what awaits Alexis and Paul when they complete their education on Earth. For Alexis, the hope that she may find her lost father helps hold back her tears, sometimes. Paul must face many challenges in his quest to build the star-spanning corporation that keeps Terran research moving at hyper speed and helps give humanity a position of power in the Galactic Community.
Alexis unique combat style puts her in an unusual position: She becomes a hero for Earth, building a legacy in the form of an elite fighting fleet that quickly proves competent enough to tackle the enemy that the Galactic Community Legislature refuses to admit exists.
Pauls company, AdAstra, was founded by a very unusual man: Martin StarFox, the mystery man who traveled between stars before he discovered how to make interstellar travel feasible for the rest of us. Martin is older than Paul and Alexis, having spent many years in research by the time they even begin their space training. It is Martins first flight that brings us our first information about the Galactic Community, as well as political elements who refuse to join the GC. His energy and enthusiasm while traveling amongst the stars creates such popular knowledge of Earth that the GC is pressured to accelerate its schedule for Earths invitation to join the GC. Events prove that even so, the invitation was not too premature.
We see some of Martins story, alongside Pauls and Alexis intertwining tales. We meet species ranging from the incredible to the unbelievable: Humanoids, friendly pint-sized traders with sharp teeth, cold-hearted weavers of energy webs, seemingly mindless scavengers, and more. Our travelers encounter peoples whose ways of thinking are so alien that even the GCs guidelines dont apply, and whose technology is so awesome that it seems inconceivable. They witness the construction of spacecraft so beautiful that it seems they were born for beauty. They hear hints of others . . .
This book was begun as a way to help players get a quick feel for the world of an online video game Ive spent many hours designing, but writing the book took over writing the game. Someday I may get back to the game, and if I do, players who have read this book will find many familiar things. Players who enjoy the game are just as likely to enjoy the book.
Characters
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Paul Predhom
Alexis Torii
Captain Pierce
Martin StarFox Shelley
Terella (Tchak-li'h ngar h'lee)
Perastra
Leirlon agMolajich
eLenOri niWahlajich
eLIren niWahlajich
eLeRoni niWahlajich
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Peoples
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Verellos -- Terellas people. Most of them have Star Feet and are telepathic. Their mythology indicates that they emigrated from Earth centuries ago. Their name is a holdover from their time on Earth: Most of them were migrant workers, and were known as verellos in some European cultures even then. They have recently withdrawn from the Galactic Community, and specifically from their former hosts, the Rihda. When the Verellos left Earth, the Rihda were the first people they encountered. Being unprepared for the harshness of travelling between stars, the Verellos were forced to accept an alliance with the Rihda. This alliance became virtual slavery, over the centuries, until they finally moved to a planet of their own, Migshrahckeh. (Mig-tlateh?)
Rihda -- Inhabitants of Dogaster and a few other relatively un-important systems. Their systems proximity to Earth makes them more important to US, though, and put them in a position to influence the Verellos when they first travelled to the stars.
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Planets
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Dogaster -- First planet Martin travels to, where he rescues Terella and meets Perastra. Orbits a small red star, probably a class M red dwarf. Most of the population lives in valleys along the somewhat wobbly terminator: The planet is so close to its dim star that it is tidally locked to it. The mountains help protect life from the frequent solar flares...
Migshrahckeh -- Known as Mandrake to Earth. Hidden home-in-exile of Terellas people. There are rumors that Mandrake has no sun, but the rumors are difficult to confirm, as visitors arent ever taken above-ground. Even the spaceport is in a huge cavern. The only way to get there is aboard a Verellos ship; the Verellos claim that the jump cannot be done with technology.
arldil -- Home of Leirlons family, and Paul Predhoms headquarters after Be Cautious with Culture. Legend indicates it was founded by star travellers centuries ago; linguistic analysis suggests they may have come from Earth.
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Ships
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SF-32 DeerHawk -- The most ubiquitous ship in Earths Navy. Fairly powerful, fast, stealth-capable. One of our most versatile fighters.
SallyAnne shuttle -- Introductory civilian shuttle/trainer. Not much of a boat when new, but due to its modern nanotech, its capable of extended travel without docking for fuel/energy or repairs, and can be upgraded to a greater degree than any previous ship of Earth manufacture.
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Unusual terms
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Star Feet -- The ability to fly in space, and especially between stars, without a manufactured space craft or suit of any kind. The Verellos, and some others, are capable of forming a ship with purely mental power, although the more scientifically educated among them claim they apply principles of quantum mechanics and advanced physics. Many Verellos are capable of building material objects from thin air, and create their own shields and weapons mentally as well.
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Comments (15)
Unicornst
I wondered about your comment on my image and couldn't figure out what you meant by it. Now I know. There are not any words to tell you how sorry I am at this moment. I know how you feel about Othila. All I can say is hugs!!!!Man, that sounds lame. But it's heart meant!!
SophiaDeer
Hugs!! I lost my dear cat recently and can understand the pain.
figharo
It's humbling to see the way they face illness. They never seem to give up. You wrote this well and brought back bittersweet memories.
TallPockets
As someone who went through a similar experience last year with my 17 year old sweetie I understand. Lovely written tribute. Peace.
eternalwytch1
I grieve with thee....
Digitell
Oh I am so very sorry!! I know too much how you feel! 2 years ago I had to do the very same thing to my kitty whom I had for 14 years..since she was 6 weeks old. Tumor..in her uterus. I do understand your pain...so very sad...So sorry HUGS !!!!
cliff-dweller
This is a wonderful tribute you've written. Peace to you and to your dear Othila.
Steak
I had to delete this once to add, you DID NOT kill Tee. You ended the suffering he was going through in a peacfull manner. Now on to my former comment.................................................................................. I have too much to say about this writing. Like others commenting here I too have a bad loss. "BO" a 17 year old black lab I had raised from 5 weeks old. But my moment to hold my face to his and tell him goodbye was stolen from me by my now ex-wife. She had taken him while I was at work and had him put to sleep because he was old and I was having to care for him and spend too much time in her opinion doing so. I never did or can forgive the fact I wasn't there. He was in my life for 17 years she was at that time in it for 10. No that wasn't why the marrage broke up. It lasted another 6 years but it sure didn't help it grow stronger. I am so Sorry for your loss and Rest In Peace Othila.
micsteel
Thank you all for your wonderfully supportive comments! I'm sorry that so many of us have such pain in common... I wish death wasn't necessary! 17 years seems to be a bad number for dogs: Whiskers was 17. Othila wasn't quite 7, but during his short life I also lost a nephew at 27, and his step-father at 54, both to cancer.
debh
So totally heartbreaking! I'll not go into detail, suffice it to say I have suffered this tragedy more than once and will again. Although I have used this quote before I have always found it comforting... "When you are sorrowful look again in your heart, and you shall see that in truth you are weeping for that which has been your delight." ---- From the Prophet by Kahlil Gibran
FireTemptress
Giant hugs This one brought tears to my eyes... I have a treasured friend that curls up with me at night, and can only imagine how difficult this is for you. As futile as it is, I offer condolences and support.
luckyred
The love for animals and the pain of loss seem to be a another common bond. Animals have always meant more to me than people, and yes, I know many would scoff at this, but it's a truth. I have gotten into many fights in my lifetime over their defense (another thing many think silly, but oh well).
evensteven
I too know what you are feeling my friend. I had to put down my best friend of fifteen years under similar circumstances. (no tumors. Liver cancer)He died in my arms and I couldn't see through the tears to write the check for the vet. Well written. I miss Bear.
tvernuccio
i'm so sorry about your loss...oh man...that's hard. don't blame yourself for what you did. you know, we can only suffer so much. sounds like he suffered a lot, and you ended his suffering which would have ended in his death anyway. i had a bird once whom i loved more than any other pet. she was more affectionate than any cat, dog, chicken, horse, pony, etc that i ever had. she died about 6 years ago i guess. i still miss her. anyway...a powerful piece you wrote...gut-wrenching and quite stirring.
micsteel
I still miss Othila. I didn't realize it had been so long....