Tiny by katili
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Description
Tiny
Fastened with a popper
there in the buttock of my soul
there, can you see
beside the thickened heart
near the spoiled, burned guts.
My spirit.
Comments (4)
TallPockets
Loved the 'spirit' of this work!
PumaSue
WOW!! You sound as if your spirit is in pain. Your poem is beautiful and sad at the same time. Your photo reminds me of the firey and murky waters of hell...If there is such a place. I know you write from your heart. Take care, friend. Hugs
figharo
I want to rewrite my comment, it was too analytical, and this is a very heartfelt piece, I still say that I felt this, and that perhaps, like the tide, spirits fall and rise, and I do find it interesting that you chose water as your image, an element in constant flux, but there's more. This is a very personal and gutsy piece to put out there, I tend to hide my spirit when it feels low, and you did not, I salute that...
cash_crop
I like the picture but... i can't understand the poem maybe because english isn't my mother-tongue