Waiting by goldah

Photography • Romance • posted on Aug 24, 2005

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I am practicing with lighting and B/W pictures...any critisism is appreciated.. Thanks for Looking, AngelStudios(goldah)

Comments (10)

gelf56

6:11PM | Wed, 24 August 2005

wow its really iconic that bed looks supercool too i love picture that you can see a story attached to in your mind i think this could have many nice lighting too well done

dragonfly2000

6:11PM | Wed, 24 August 2005

Lighting, pose and comp are pretty good, actually with that strong of a natural light the exposure is really good. I'm probably too much of a studio photographer, but i'd add a wee bit of hair/back light on her, and not crop the feet off. What sort of camera are you using btw?

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goldah

6:21PM | Wed, 24 August 2005

actually the feet aren't cropped...lol..they are cut off...I will try again tomorrow...after I get alot of opinions...I will take everything and try again...I am using a Fugi 5500...plus it's new and I'm just learning it :)

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MT_Cup

6:29PM | Wed, 24 August 2005

The composition is nice, and I think you did a good job with such a strong light contast. Not much tweaking to make this a great piece. I would try to balance the light a wee bit. As dragonfly stated, having the model's feet in the shot would be a big help. I would not change the pose.

gedwarderb

7:12PM | Wed, 24 August 2005

This woman appears to have beautiful long hair; I'd like to see a bit more definition. To me B&W is like radio - you get just enough information to let your imagination go wild.

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kimariehere

10:11PM | Wed, 24 August 2005

beautifully done ... i love the question that remains who is she waiting for? lovley canopy bed as well!!

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kenwas

12:27AM | Thu, 25 August 2005

Excellent image.

gwfa

1:31AM | Thu, 25 August 2005

try not to crop the feet and underexpose a bit (to have more structure in the curtain) and a less neat bedspread would add to the atmosphere... (a reflector could also help a lot)

cynlee

11:59PM | Fri, 26 August 2005

real nice look to this in the light & subject matter... agree, the feet.. :]

tudec

7:45PM | Mon, 07 November 2005

Beautiful. Lovely. Wonderful. These are the words that I feel describe this picture. :)