Woman by evensteven
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Description
She is an expert on profound religious experiences
she thinks love is the answer
in an effort to conceal the pain
her spirit cries in response to the prophecies
it dawns on you that she is really bad at this
she wants to save you from yourself
this night is so magical
you don't need another
as she tries to grab your hand
or something
oh but it's so comfortable here
she requires pennance with no unnesessary motion
in the face of your innocence
she proudly remains guilty.
Just more mindless babble
Comments (4)
micsteel
Gee, I don't know, Stephen... If poetry is meant to communicate, I'm lost! :) I deeply feel a couple of lines, but others are beyond my ken. I'm sure there's more to this story; perhaps you aren't ready to face it, or admit it, yet? Or you're unwilling to cause harm... to her? Let it out: Show it all to us!
evensteven
You're probably right my friend. Sometimes those dislocated bits of grey matter floating around in the vacuous reaches of my skull can manage to hook themselves together in some pretty strange ways. The bad thing is, it often makes a perverse kind of sense to me. This one probably never should have been offered for public consumption, but, not being from this part of the galaxy, I often forget how to act.
FireTemptress
Somehow, this one makes sense to me.... This seems to me, to be the disjointed and unconnected pieces and parts of a woman, that somehow, strangely make up her whole. I like the feel of this one.
ztunned
its okay, evensteven. i too am from a different galaxy and understand the culture shock.