Choices by FireTemptress
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Description
Choices
Lying here
In bed next to you
Not quite sure what we are
Quiet sounds
I hear you breathe
Touching your face from afar
Choices made
To stop right here
It comforting, just what we have
Gather close
I can feel your warmth
Close my eyes and just breathe
Watchful eyes
I see what you hide
I hold myself back cause of fear
My choice
You stay where you are
A friendship that we both hold dear
Heart speaks
It
Comments (7)
Shadowmonkey
A wonder to read ;0)
romanceworks
Beautiful and tender poem and wow on that thumbnail. :o) CC
sky13point1
What makes this a full and interesting read is all that is not being said, what is in between the lines. Seems to be a lot of treasure between those lines.
FireTemptress
Thank you all for your comments. You are right... there is allot not being said in this one. I couldn't make myself open up and really feel what I was trying to say. I guess there will be more, when I can reach deeper and let it out. :-)
micsteel
What a loving poem... even with the pain and fear, we see commitment and promise. Sadly, though, the feeling that the compromises made are perhaps because no one better has entered the narrator's life, rather than because the relationship is truly one's dream... Anguish, love, comfort, fear... Very nice!
SusiQ
The true nature of humans is to protect ourselves from any hurt or harm, even if it means we tone down the pleasure and not give our all. This is a beautiful poem, great work!
fluffgirl
maybe what you did not say is that maybe no matter how wonderfull it all is ..it is not enough... great reading as always jen...