Hands of Time by cjmjar
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Its been a while since I've posted anything Ive been putting my creativ side aside for work and stuff but Thank you for taking a look I am not much of a writer so my punctuation and sentence structure may not be correct but thank you again.
Comments (1)
ztunned
Hi CJ, excellent thoughts. i am still struggling with the same concept! :) I think that your piece would have been much better if you had stuck to the story(narrative).. in the end you simply explain what you think.I think its better if you illustrate your idea within the words of the narrative, and let the reader come to the conclusion. great!