empty, invisible me by Hempknotics
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Empty, invisible me
I struggle through an empty crowd
But never seem to find my way,
I scream in silence with an empty plea
Never knowing what to say,
I
Comments (2)
Wolfspirit
This poem is written well, flowed well off the tongue, and made me think dangerous if you ask some, yet, as I thought, I thought yes, this is what it is like, as for myself I have found we get so caught up in life, we tend to get lost in life so to speak, or the routine of it. Yet standing on the outside looking in as I am I can see that while we are walking the path of life wondering who we are individually of course once trapped in that frame of mind We may be lost for that moment yet were still walking, thus were moving into a new journey a new destination, and yeah some times we walk alone yet it always seems to take us some place where we find ourselves in the midst of many I hope this made sense and I thank you for sharing your writing today Excellent read.
Hempknotics
i thank you i like your poetry very much i think your an excellent writer : )