why should i tell them? by Hempknotics

Writers • (none) • posted on Sep 20, 2005

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I could tell them But would anyone hear me If I walked up to them Would anyone even see me? Would they say something? Or would I be trampled Would they ignore me? Like a crushed Pepsi can Lying next to the bench at the park Or would they actually notice me For once would someone notice me? No use getting my hopes up Nobody ever sees me Nobody ever hears me Ss why should I tell them? Why should I tell them That I am worth something That I have feelings that can be hurt That behind that my bad mask There is a part of me That is just like them Why should I tell them That all I am is human.

Comments (7)

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dtgs

10:42AM | Tue, 20 September 2005

well... its sounds, sad, swornful, but its escence is good intended, I like the concept! Keep up the good job, perhaps you should make a render with a someone picking up a crushed pepsi, because even crushed pepsis get their own place in this world.

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Shadowmonkey

6:43AM | Wed, 21 September 2005

We are who we are, I excepted it a long time ago. Beautifully put

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experimental

9:24PM | Wed, 21 September 2005

my life is sort of like that sometimes, I just called it the Annals of the Invisible Man. There are people who care out there. Many of them can be found right here on 'rosity. I care about you man.

Wolfspirit

6:12AM | Thu, 22 September 2005

You just did, tell me and you know what? HUGS! Me too! Warm Smiles Thanks for the writing by the way as yes, I find this an excellent piece mostly based on the topic at hand, yet it did flow well, and was an easy comfortable read too. P.S. Believe it or not there are a lot of people in this big ole world that forget they are human from time to time me included ha-ha it is good to be brought back to the basics. Warm smiles

dragonchick1188

11:11AM | Fri, 23 September 2005

you better post programmed that song is excellent i'm sure i won't be the only who thinks so! lylas

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Hempknotics

10:17AM | Thu, 29 September 2005

thank you all it is very down i know but but this poem was written for my school just yesterday there were four fights and one kid ended up going to the hospital it was very sad no one here seems to realize that everyone makes mistakes.

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