I'm the short, hairy one in this picture--not the one with his tongue sticking out: The one with the hat! Next to me is my Aunt Morghan and my "child," Othila, who died in August 2005.We were living in a town so small (Harper, Texas), the Post Office didn't deliver to our downtown address! I wasn't born in Texas, and I'm leaving as soon as I can! My aunt got married last Summer and moved; I moved to a town so small that I haven't seen it yet: Crabapple, Texas. I work and shop in Fredericksburg.BIOMy background includes pride and shame, like most of us. I did inhale, but I don't, and I didn't dodge. Nor did I do it and say it wasn't It. And I most definitely did not invade small countries to keep the country from seeing how dumb I am. I have strong opinions, but I love everybody: Even the wee folk. I believe that if an extra-terrestrial were to look at Earth, Je'd think, "Look! They operate machinery they don't have the skill to manage, and it causes thousands, millions, of deaths every day! See? Those bodies just laying in the road? No compassion!" And that would be just the deer... :)
In my writing, you might meet some of these extra-terrestrials. You'll get a chance to see how humanity SHOULD handle space, and a glimpse of, not Star Trek(tm), but an objective, non-human view of our entry into the galactic community.
Let me cheat here, and introduce my current main project. Humanity reaches for the stars, and finds pain and pleasure. In our own Solar System we discover competition for what we had thought were unclaimed resources beyond the outer planets: Insect-like creatures are nesting in the Kuiper Belt, using the resources they find to build their space craft. We are also offered a helping hand from the Galactic Community (GC): A mostly enlightened, but in many ways still very human, alliance of species who have the technology for space flight, and perhaps a few who dont bother with the technology. With their assistance, mankind is ready to travel the Galaxy.
One man triggers our meeting the Galactic Community, but its up to others to defend humanity from an even more powerful threat; an inter-dimensional threat that has already conquered wiser peoples than us, and is groping our way.
Earth technology and training brought us to the stars, and into the Galactic Community. This changing world -- galaxy -- is what awaits Alexis and Paul when they complete their education on Earth. For Alexis, the hope that she may find her lost father helps hold back her tears, sometimes. Paul must face many challenges in his quest to build the star-spanning corporation that keeps Terran research moving at hyper speed and helps give humanity a position of power in the Galactic Community.
Alexis unique combat style puts her in an unusual position: She becomes a hero for Earth, building a legacy in the form of an elite fighting fleet that quickly proves competent enough to tackle the enemy that the Galactic Community Legislature refuses to admit exists.
Pauls company, AdAstra, was founded by a very unusual man: Martin StarFox, the mystery man who traveled between stars before he discovered how to make interstellar travel feasible for the rest of us. Martin is older than Paul and Alexis, having spent many years in research by the time they even begin their space training. It is Martins first flight that brings us our first information about the Galactic Community, as well as political elements who refuse to join the GC. His energy and enthusiasm while traveling amongst the stars creates such popular knowledge of Earth that the GC is pressured to accelerate its schedule for Earths invitation to join the GC. Events prove that even so, the invitation was not too premature.
We see some of Martins story, alongside Pauls and Alexis intertwining tales. We meet species ranging from the incredible to the unbelievable: Humanoids, friendly pint-sized traders with sharp teeth, cold-hearted weavers of energy webs, seemingly mindless scavengers, and more. Our travelers encounter peoples whose ways of thinking are so alien that even the GCs guidelines dont apply, and whose technology is so awesome that it seems inconceivable. They witness the construction of spacecraft so beautiful that it seems they were born for beauty. They hear hints of others . . .
This book was begun as a way to help players get a quick feel for the world of an online video game Ive spent many hours designing, but writing the book took over writing the game. Someday I may get back to the game, and if I do, players who have read this book will find many familiar things. Players who enjoy the game are just as likely to enjoy the book.
Characters
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Paul Predhom
Alexis Torii
Captain Pierce
Martin StarFox Shelley
Terella (Tchak-li'h ngar h'lee)
Perastra
Leirlon agMolajich
eLenOri niWahlajich
eLIren niWahlajich
eLeRoni niWahlajich
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Peoples
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Verellos -- Terellas people. Most of them have Star Feet and are telepathic. Their mythology indicates that they emigrated from Earth centuries ago. Their name is a holdover from their time on Earth: Most of them were migrant workers, and were known as verellos in some European cultures even then. They have recently withdrawn from the Galactic Community, and specifically from their former hosts, the Rihda. When the Verellos left Earth, the Rihda were the first people they encountered. Being unprepared for the harshness of travelling between stars, the Verellos were forced to accept an alliance with the Rihda. This alliance became virtual slavery, over the centuries, until they finally moved to a planet of their own, Migshrahckeh. (Mig-tlateh?)
Rihda -- Inhabitants of Dogaster and a few other relatively un-important systems. Their systems proximity to Earth makes them more important to US, though, and put them in a position to influence the Verellos when they first travelled to the stars.
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Planets
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Dogaster -- First planet Martin travels to, where he rescues Terella and meets Perastra. Orbits a small red star, probably a class M red dwarf. Most of the population lives in valleys along the somewhat wobbly terminator: The planet is so close to its dim star that it is tidally locked to it. The mountains help protect life from the frequent solar flares...
Migshrahckeh -- Known as Mandrake to Earth. Hidden home-in-exile of Terellas people. There are rumors that Mandrake has no sun, but the rumors are difficult to confirm, as visitors arent ever taken above-ground. Even the spaceport is in a huge cavern. The only way to get there is aboard a Verellos ship; the Verellos claim that the jump cannot be done with technology.
arldil -- Home of Leirlons family, and Paul Predhoms headquarters after Be Cautious with Culture. Legend indicates it was founded by star travellers centuries ago; linguistic analysis suggests they may have come from Earth.
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Ships
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SF-32 DeerHawk -- The most ubiquitous ship in Earths Navy. Fairly powerful, fast, stealth-capable. One of our most versatile fighters.
SallyAnne shuttle -- Introductory civilian shuttle/trainer. Not much of a boat when new, but due to its modern nanotech, its capable of extended travel without docking for fuel/energy or repairs, and can be upgraded to a greater degree than any previous ship of Earth manufacture.
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Unusual terms
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Star Feet -- The ability to fly in space, and especially between stars, without a manufactured space craft or suit of any kind. The Verellos, and some others, are capable of forming a ship with purely mental power, although the more scientifically educated among them claim they apply principles of quantum mechanics and advanced physics. Many Verellos are capable of building material objects from thin air, and create their own shields and weapons mentally as well.
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Comments (12)
SophiaDeer
Great job with DAZ Studio! I like his expression.
la_morocha
Good pose and expression. There is some jaggedness around the figure that might be from postwork with a "magic wand". You might try saving out your image from Studio as a ".png" to drop out the background (it'll get rid of the "ant-trails").
Unicornst
It is a good pose and expression. Gotta go with la morocha about saving the render in Studio as a png. You'll lose that jagged edge. Also you might want to check the specular on the sword. Turn it a bit darker and the sword won't come out so white. Otherwise, great image!
Digitell
Well I tried to comment on this earlier today but Renderosity went down on me again!! So here I am again...he looks great! Love his pose and expression! ANd his hair is very well done! Wonderful job!! :)
micsteel
Okay, I admit it: I forgot ot say that I postworked the image in an old version of PhotoShop, the LE version, at that, instead of using Gimp. :) My last image used png, but I was hoping to eliminate the sharp edges so I tried tiff this time, which seems to--in combination with the old PhotoShop, anyway--lose transparency. My patience ran out when I couldn't keep my eyes open, so I posted doodoo--as in do more, do it again! :D Sorry, guys: I'll do better next time!
Wolfspirit
Nothing like a naked man coming to your rescueShoo, makes me sweat watching the story unfoldI love it Keep it up MikeI mean the story and the sword you know. Laugh out loud! Good evening Mike! Whoa, I need coffee and yes, youre always improving here in the visuals and you know what? I know too many people with that exact birth date that it is getting crazy. Yet, wow that is cool Pieces are fantastic people! I know I have not helped much today with suggestions on improvement, yet sometimes we need to just do it, to get better at it. Smiles Have fun and thanks for sharing! Off to the coffee pot I go with my imagination expanding at the thoughtmmgood. The thought of hot delish coffee that isha-ha, ok I am shutting up now.
BBarbs
LOL@Wolfspirit. Finally I have managed to get your image to load. I, of course being a Pisces too, agree wholeheartedly about Pisces being fantastic people. lol. I love following this story. He sure is one great looking Michael 3. I wouldnt mind him coming to my rescue. ha ha. Kalea has all the luck ! Fabulous work with his expression and pose. There is something about that sword that I would not want to be on the other end of it....BIG OUCH. I think you have definitely caught the defender in him ! Uh, can I borrow him. Does he do Hornet infestations ? Perfect ! VOTE and FAV
luckyred
Your expression and pose once again are very well executed. You have a knack for capturing natural movement. You did a good job of lighting to blend in with your background. The only thing you need to work out are your edges (as if you don't know that already :D). One little trick is to blow your image up very large and use a very small brush and smooth the edges with the soften setting. I have used that often. ~hugs~
Clarissa_Bertelsmann
This looks like a cartoon charater of you. p.s. the younger days! love always your favorite person. hahaha
cwk
Okay, Kallea's fine. Run Gator, Run!! Great expression once again! You're really getting good at this!!! ~Charlie
shanpoo
Great expression on his face he means business so watch out!!! Everyone wants more and more of your stories BRAVO!!....excellent image...shanpoo ;}
Deane
Great expression and pose once again. That gator better watch out!!!