Early Light by goldah

Photography • Romance • posted on Oct 07, 2005

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Well...I'm trying something different with this pic, you may have seen the B/W one I posted a couple of weeks ago...I tried to "Digitally Paint" it and left it colorized....any comment and critism on improvement is apriciated.. Thanks for Looking, AngelStudios(goldah) Taken with a Fuji5500~finepix

Comments (8)

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DavidEMartin

9:04AM | Fri, 07 October 2005

This is colorized? Wow. Nicely done! Looking at both this and "Reminiscing" (you might want to go back and correct the spelling), a couple thoughts... The model has lovely hair but I wish we could see a hint of her face. in "R" we can asuume it's bleached out by the window's light but in "EL" the hair looks like it's been brushed forward over her face. (Of course, maybe it was one of those mornings...) The sheet gathered round her was a naturalistic touch. I would have had it a bit looser to expose more of her back but that's just a personal preference. The blurriness of "EL" gives the image a feeling of early waking, when neither our eyes nor our minds are quite focussed. ..... Not knowing how many images you shot this session, this may be a redundant comment-- Consider an image of the lass sitting on the edge of the bed, looking toward the window (basically it's this image a minute earlier).

gelf56

9:10AM | Fri, 07 October 2005

wow if i didnt know better i would never know this is a photo! i actually like this even better than the origanal mono, agreed though just a tiny bit more fleash and i hint of the expression on her face would make it even better.

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goldah

9:34AM | Fri, 07 October 2005

Believe me...you don't want to see my face that early in the morning ^_^...thanks for the comments..very detailed...thank you :)

MrM

10:35AM | Fri, 07 October 2005

I like better than the B&W. I have to disagree with the flesh comment, however. If one were to get up, wrap the blanket around them to look out the window...this is how it would look! If you hadn't said it was painted, I would have assumed it was the photograph. Fantastic job. I have to agree that a hint of the face would have been nice...would add to the depth of the picture...and your face can't be that bad in the morning!!!

dragonfly2000

1:47PM | Fri, 07 October 2005

B&W or colour, personal choice i think - after having looked again at the photo then this again, the one real problem area - in that i'am not sure what i'm looking at - is the tatoo. Only obvious in the photo, looks like a wound or messy work here. Colour choices are wonderful in this.

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