I'm a beginner modeler and this was my first attempt at a humanoid figure. She is supposed to be cartoony and somewhat creepy looking. I plan on using her for a comic book as a model - I pose her, someone else actually draws her. Even though she'll probably never make it out of being a template, I wish to continue to improve her. I want feedback on what needs to be changed. Once I added a bone structure I realized that her arms were a bit too long for her body. I know the hands need some work as well. Please drop me some helpful advice. Model was created in Wings and rendered in poser. This was the first time I was able to successfully implement bones, though there are many problems. The pictures are in "cartoon w/ line" mode because I have yet to find a good way to render cartoon images in Poser that looks good, especially with this model. PROBLEMS WITH BONES (any advice?): -when twisting her hand, the forearm becomes distorted (notice left arm) -When moving legs too far, the skirt begins to break up -The knee cap acts a little funny when bending the legs (I think I just broke the leg in the wrong place for bending) -I am not interested in problems with color/texture as of now; I did not complete the UV mapping process so some parts of her may be shiny when they shouldn't (parts of her right arm).