Arbitration Part 2 by abg24

Poser • Story/Sequential • posted on Oct 28, 2005

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OkayThis is a modified version of plate two.The original plate just looked ... too much like a regular comic.I do not want to follow that format.So, here is a format that I came up with,something different and I hope that is pleasing to you.
So, how do you like the layout?
I'm on assignment for tomorrow but I will post on Sunday.Till then, to all that have commented on my last plateand to all who just dropped by to take a lookThank you.Cheers!Aaron

Comments (7)

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Mea

5:46PM | Fri, 28 October 2005

Wow. Very nicely done. I like how you tell his thoughts and the events leading up to the present in parallel, but I'm not quite sure the layout works. The two sides of the narrative feel too separated in this space. I think you can fix it by moving the character's image a little more dead center so that it overlaps bot sets of text a little. That might tie everything together visually. BTW: love that last shot. Very nice framing.

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Jean-Luc_Ajrarn

6:58PM | Fri, 28 October 2005

Outstanding story and image, as you always do. :D Terrific work! :D V

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abg24

9:47PM | Fri, 28 October 2005

This is the third revision of plate 2. Thanks to Mea (I did the wrong by calling her Dea), I took her suggestion and modified the image. The original held the first two inserts of Delyan, slightly of to right. Thank you Mea, and I do apollogize for the error on my behalf.

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magickmedbh

8:31AM | Sat, 29 October 2005

Awesome work! I love the lighting, and the format! Excellent!

thip

12:15PM | Fri, 04 November 2005

HEY - what's wrong with comicbook format?!? Dammit, your first page showed you do it so well - now I feel CHEATED LOL Either way, you tell your story very well, keep it up1

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