The End by FireTemptress
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The End
(6/23/04)
Well I knew that it would hurt
I didn
Comments (7)
Dianthus
Beautiful words. Think alot will feel your pain and loss. Lovely :)
SusiQ
Very nice and emotional but don't be shy to skip a word or two to keep the rhythm of the poem. It helps keep the image clear. By that is just my humble opinion. Hugs to you!
TallPockets
"So thank you for the time we had" -- Superb work!!
Meezan
Good piece. Very FireTemptressii
Actrise
Sorrow... That's all I can feel coming from this.. It's lovely.. Brought a tear actually.
Zabeth
Simply marvellous!
soulofharmony
I had my eyes open I knew it going in I should have been more careful Either way I couldnt win Now the choice has been made What we had is done Although it is the best choice Now I have no where I can run When other ones would hurt me His touch would comfort me And even though we knew its wrong Somehow it always had to be love those 3 verses :)..:))