*awaiting an answer* by crazedblonde
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Description
i am a highschool art student and this is my latest. i was working with the shadowing. how is my work?
Comments (7)
akulla
Nice composition, seems a little washed out. Was there any post work? Keep trying!!
Mondwin
Cool and brilliant compo!!!Well done!!bravo!V:DDD
grenogs
pretty cool image, nice rendering to. only a few sugestions however, 1. either crop the top of the image or even rais her body a little higher to the top, at the moment she looks to low in the image. 2. defuse the image of the tower in the background, seems to overpower the red of her catsuite, making your eyes to wonder away from her. 3. also bringing the right post in closer to her back and centralizing her will help to keep her a your main view point. Hope these sugestions help, look forward to seeing your next image. :)
eryt
iu agree with grenogs..also..would not have the hair strand going behind the wall..if it were not..then you would keep the perspective of distance behind her..it kinda breaks it up...keep up the work..look forward to your progress...~~::))
morin3000
Great details in this wonderful composition. Nice work.* V****
JZArt3DSteel
Nice sunset/sunrise atmosphere with the character. I agree, move the hair on the LEFT a little closer to her head and it will look more in depth. If you know how 2 add textures to the hair, that might make it more in depth and realistic. Nice scene! Keep it up!
chrisuribe
Wow! I love it! maybe a bit more flow to the hair and the shadow projected from the wall or pillar on the left is casted on her and on the background which appears to be much farther, I think that shadow should be only on her.