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MidnightPlatinum
I just read your bio so I'll be gentle, but this is difficult to read and doesn't feel like it has much that's fresh. You're disciplined though in your rhymes and stanzas and have unique stylistic phrasings that come up, but this poem, and I am being objective, just isn't very good. "Secret Pleasure" is witty and "Shades of Grey" shows a good mind, so I am only saying these things out of honesty and helpfulness. But even those poems are somewhat sub par. "Shades of Grey" comes close to being something special though. If you're affected by these comments at all IM me sometime and we can talk. -Midnight
FireTemptress
Thank you for your comment, and helping me get better.... To be honest, this is mostly an emotional outlet for me. The beauty of art, is that it can all be different. Thank you again.
eternalwytch1
I could feel the emotion in this piece. Each line had it's own unique voice.
soulofharmony
beautifully written love all the words and verse it flows.. its really from the heart :)..:)))
TallPockets
A very accurate description on life relationships and the choices we all make or don't make. T.P.