archiform 3d challenge by mia_
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http://www.archiform3d.com/c4d-architectural-challenge.htm
this is the link for the challenge for c4d users, and here is my result, please comment and critic so i can improove...
Comments (9)
spidermurph
Looks great, beautiful design. If I had to make one point though. I think the stilt supports made the structure look a bit flimsy. Murph
KeremGogus
I think its perfect and nothing to improve ! :D
dbigers
I agree on the point about the supports. Also, the grass appears a bit too bright. The curb in the second image stops too abruptly. Perhaps do something with the edge where it meets the grass. It looks as if it has no depth because the grass goes all the way to the edge. Also, the brown gutter in the first image appears out of place for some reason, not sure why, perhaps the texture used. Finally, the texture on the wood siding has lines that run through it horizontally, they appear to wrap around to the other side. I hope I have not been too critical, because minor quibbles aside I really like the image. Congratulations!!
mia_
thanx for the detailed comment, it really helps
_eko_
realy good work hope to see future work. bets of luck
taurus66
qite nice! two points i'd criticise: the border between street and lawn needs to be cleared. the second thing are the down pipes. by giving them a contrasting color to the cladding, they recieve an optical enhancement, which they don't deserve.
wolfomatisch
great work....
Perry6
Very nice! I agree that the supports don't look very strong. Grass color was very distracting. Excellent work on the modeling!
nataliachohan
Excellent efforts to emphasize these points,Thanks for sharing.... 3D Architectural Animation Services