Smile part 1/2 by shipmanjonathan

Poser • Pin-ups • posted on Nov 13, 2005

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Well, this is half about done. Finally got the skin texture I wanted thank's guy's. Now just need to finish the rest of the posing and add clothing. Not too much hehe. I have an idea of what I want to do. Well, I changed a few things, the hair and not as bright lipstick. Let me know what you think. Well, time to get back to finishing it. COMMENT'S, VOTES, CRITISM'S (not the bad kind), RANKING'S, ALL ACCEPTED AND VERY MUCH APPRECIATED. Credit time: 1. Kozaburo hair

Comments (31)

Tamela.J.

10:37PM | Sun, 13 November 2005

Its lookin really good Jonathan. The teeth look fabulous & I love the new lipstick!! Xcellent work!

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RGUS

10:52PM | Sun, 13 November 2005

Excellent skin texture... I do love those lips... Awesome image! (V)

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anitalee

10:53PM | Sun, 13 November 2005

Very nice work, I like this color for the lips too.

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Sivana

10:56PM | Sun, 13 November 2005

I also think the expression is very good and so is the skin and lipcolor. Very good portrait!!!

Pearl_Phoenix

10:58PM | Sun, 13 November 2005

ooo very pretty! I like this one better :)

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webdancer

10:59PM | Sun, 13 November 2005

Skin tone is perfect! I like the color or her lips as well!

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fluffgirl

11:26PM | Sun, 13 November 2005

it,s looking good so far

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brycek

12:23AM | Mon, 14 November 2005

Beautiful, and such a lovely texture!!

MariaAJMD

1:09AM | Mon, 14 November 2005

Really goregous textures and I like the lighter lipstick much better. Wonderful work, hun. HUGS Maria

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Mondwin

3:13AM | Mon, 14 November 2005

Beauty lipstik and splendid portrait!!!bravo as usual!!V:DDD

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mdbruffy

4:17AM | Mon, 14 November 2005

jonathan,there's no critic that I can give. She looks ready to walk off the screen. Fantastic job!

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Mercytoo

5:07AM | Mon, 14 November 2005

She's looking really good! Keep up the good work

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face_off

5:16AM | Mon, 14 November 2005

She's look'in good. You may be able to improve the look of her face a little by making her smile a little less 'forced'.

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antje

7:01AM | Mon, 14 November 2005

She's pretty. I like her expression and those textures. :o)

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jennifer11

7:02AM | Mon, 14 November 2005

Like the more natural looking lip color. The hair looks much softer with the wisp moved to the front. Can't wait to see the finished product. Excellent Work, Jonathan!

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mejed

7:52AM | Mon, 14 November 2005

I agree with face off, other than that, It`s looking pretty damn good. :0 johnny

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sandraz63

7:57AM | Mon, 14 November 2005

She looks beautiful, I like her texture..Excellent work!!!

bramhambabe

8:15AM | Mon, 14 November 2005

Superb work jonathan and i agree that the lighter lipstick is better :) you have done so fantastic since you started and im proud of you, now as for that name, i dont think she looks like a sandra more a sue but thats your choice :) Excellent work hon!! Well done :) Hugs Trish xxx

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lululee

8:21AM | Mon, 14 November 2005

Beautiful ART. Stunning lips.

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dricci

9:18AM | Mon, 14 November 2005

Excellent render!!!! Love her skin!!!! ;) Dave

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ACS-001

11:24AM | Mon, 14 November 2005

The textures here are wonderful but I liked your previous post a whole lot more. Her lips look really unnatural here (the contortion, not the lipstick), and you cropped the image too high up -- it'd look better stylistically if we could see more of her neck. Some advice: Poser figures have a stiffness about them that make realism very hard, but you did such good work on the last render by combining a subtle facial expression with glamorous make-up and those over-the-top lips ;) I think the lesson here is to use subtlety more often when dealing with stiff figures. Ciao.

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DRAKELOT

12:22PM | Mon, 14 November 2005

Where did you take the photo ? Amazing realism and perfect texture work ... EXCELLENT V ... the hair looks perfect and those lips ... WWWOOOWWW ... Outstanding Jonathan.

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Kspada

12:27PM | Mon, 14 November 2005

Better hair, much more feminine. The lips look more realistic now. Keep it going, can't wait to see the final result. :)

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Bernado

2:33PM | Mon, 14 November 2005

Lovely face. Nice skin texture and tone. You seem to make the best of each texture. I like her eyes very much. Her lips are nice and sensous but maybe a bit too exaggerate because the corners of the mouth look a bit strange. Beautiful nonetheless.

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