Tower of Babel by Elminster_ZK
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I'm not sure what exactly it is, but it looks cool methinks. Please give me any kind of suggestions or criticisms, as I am planning to submit this to a magazine publication contest(don't laugh, I mean it, I'm trying!)
-Thanks a million
-Zak
Comments (5)
graemeb
Very abstract Zac I like it. The left edge of the building is a bit sharp if you just soften it it will give it movement and make it site in the image better and maybe a bit of fragmenting at the base where it's braking up but it's got something going for it, it's more arty than your usual, good luck and make sure you let us know how you went.
Irish
Different but terrific! Good luck and hope you do well. Bravo!!!
Danceswithroos
I agree it is a little more abstract but I assume thats the look you were going for. Love the lighting effects too. I hope it goes well with the publication . Well done!
Alienworlds
Very different. It looks very alien. What is it crashing into exactly? I like the 'electrical?' effects around the object.
Gwynhale
Colors, textures and the general atmosphere is great, but as you asked for CC, I have to join graemeb saying that the edges of the tower are too sharp. If the tower is falling, you may even think about some motion blur effect in postwork. And also you may try to change the composition, the good old 1/3 - 2/3 rule generally works better than the 50-50 ratio you used between the ground and sky ...