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At Seventeen

Poser Atmosphere/Mood posted on Nov 30, 2005
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I LEARNED THE TRUTH AT SEVENTEEN THAT LOVE WAS MEANT FOR BEAUTY QUEENS AND HIGH SCHOOL GIRLS WITH CLEAR SKINNED SMILES WHO MARRIED YOUNG AND THEN RETIRED THE VALENTINES I NEVER KNEW THE FRIDAY NIGHT CHARADES OF YOUTH WERE SPENT ON ONE MORE BEAUTIFUL AT SEVENTEEN I LEARNED THE TRUTH AND THOSE OF US WITH RAVAGED FACES LACKING IN THE SOCIAL GRACES DESPERATELY REMAINED AT HOME INVENTING LOVERS ON THE PHONE WHO CALLED TO SAY - COME DANCE WITH ME AND MURMURED VAGUE OBSCENITIES IT ISN'T ALL IT SEEMS AT SEVENTEEN A BROWN EYED GIRL IN HAND ME DOWNS WHOSE NAME I NEVER COULD PRONOUNCE SAID - PITY PLEASE THE ONES WHO SERVE THEY ONLY GET WHAT THEY DESERVE THE RICH RELATIONED HOMETOWN QUEEN MARRIES INTO WHAT SHE NEEDS WITH A GUARANTEE OF COMPANY AND HAVEN FOR THE ELDERLY SO REMEMBER THOSE WHO WIN THE GAME LOSE THE LOVE THEY SOUGHT TO GAIN IN DEBENTURES OF QUALITY AND DUBIOUS INTEGRITY THEIR SMALL-TOWN EYES WILL GAPE AT YOU IN DULL SURPRISE WHEN PAYMENT DUE EXCEEDS ACCOUNTS RECEIVED AT SEVENTEEN TO THOSE OF US WHO KNEW THE PAIN OF VALENTINES THAT NEVER CAME AND THOSE WHOSE NAMES WERE NEVER CALLED WHEN CHOOSING SIDES FOR BASKETBALL IT WAS LONG AGO AND FAR AWAY THE WORLD WAS YOUNGER THAN TODAY WHEN DREAMS WERE ALL THEY GAVE FOR FREE TO UGLY DUCKLING GIRLS LIKE ME WE ALL PLAY THE GAME, AND WHEN WE DARE WE CHEAT OURSELVES AT SOLITAIRE INVENTING LOVERS ON THE PHONE REPENTING OTHER LIVES UNKNOWN THAT CALL AND SAY - COME ON, DANCE WITH ME AND MURMUR VAGUE OBSCENITIES AT UGLY GIRLS LIKE ME, AT SEVENTEEN AT SEVENTEEN (Janis Ian) Thanks for Viewing

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dalma

5:14AM | Wed, 30 November 2005

Je ne parle pas anglais, mais l'image est superbe!!!

Gam1

5:21AM | Wed, 30 November 2005

Excellent.I`m likeing this piece a whole lot really lovely work.

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ariaans

5:27AM | Wed, 30 November 2005

Beautiful rhyme and beautiful image!! This girl looks sad (beautiful expression!) but looks very pretty to me!~! Wonderful atmosphere and lightning/colors!!

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byron7

5:39AM | Wed, 30 November 2005

I think you have managed to illustrate her feelings well. The light is excellent and the pose superb. Bravo!!!

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TheGroovyDude

5:57AM | Wed, 30 November 2005

Great poem and image, they suit each other very well............. excellent work.......

Eurion

6:22AM | Wed, 30 November 2005

Beautiful image that matches the poem perfectly! Well done!

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akulla

6:55AM | Wed, 30 November 2005

Fabulous expression, and concept.

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dricci

10:10AM | Wed, 30 November 2005

Beautiful scene (little sad!) Awesome work!!!!! Love that song too!!!! ;) Dave

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Stormbreaker

4:05PM | Wed, 30 November 2005

Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

Zrincx

4:41PM | Wed, 30 November 2005

Excellent!

wishes3d

2:21PM | Thu, 01 December 2005

Excellent!

wrdgirl

7:47AM | Sat, 03 December 2005

Love the song. (Now it's going to be stuck in my head!) You really got the expression right. Really nice work.

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cildes

11:17AM | Sun, 11 December 2005

Image magnifique d'un realisme parfait.

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vaggabondd

3:16AM | Fri, 03 February 2006

you have captured sadness. very nice


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