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"heavens stairway"

Bryce Fantasy posted on Dec 01, 2005
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(highschool art student) here is a pic i made using the stairs. please give me some comments to give to my teacher so he can grade me. thanks for viewing...

Comments (7)


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wizardangel1

10:41AM | Thu, 01 December 2005

Texture needs bump to travel add a touch to the top tread. Frankly tweek your color to add depth on those white parts would soften the harsh edge. But it's a very excellent image-flowerpots for a scale=Scale of fairy to stair puts her as a very tall slender !!!

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aliensprog

11:03AM | Thu, 01 December 2005

Agree. Bump. Also I can't help but notice a lack of shadows on the stairs from the figure. Maybe intended it that way? Maybe the feeling of clouds/mist would give it a more angelic feel. Tweak contrast maybe to make it lighter. It ooks like you ran a filter on the wings. Keep it natural and blur the wings a bit. I guess what I am trying to say is soften it. Hope my humble opinion helps. Nice one.

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sazzart

11:31AM | Thu, 01 December 2005

Gave you 'excell' for depth POV. In 'closeups' like this you need bump/texture. Good going.

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3DKids

12:15PM | Thu, 01 December 2005

The stiars look great but, the angel looks "Cut & paste" because of no shadows under her, easily fixed in post prodction (Very light and soft nuetral gray would do it, just a hint to fool the eye, then add a little gussian blur and transparency to the layer.), but the easiest way is to import the figure into Bryce and render it all together, maybe add some colour to the ambience of her shading instead of "Gray" and some Depth Of Feild to focus on your subject matter. Good Luck.

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mishelleb

4:14PM | Tue, 06 December 2005

Just needs some refining ..colors and shadows. Too much white. Even up those breasts and add some interest.

crazedblonde

4:04PM | Wed, 07 December 2005

the angel need some more work with the posing and shadows. add alittle more to the wings. they are missing something. they look to fake as if it doesnt belong to this picture.

joeNova

10:42AM | Mon, 25 September 2006

Thats some harsh criticism but you take it very well I will give you that.. I didnt know that you have been on here that long but thats kind of cool... Still traveling


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