Lonesome Tree by evielouise

Bryce • Landscape • posted on Jan 14, 2006

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hi everyone hope all is good with all of you They say practice makes perfect This is far from perfect but its my third try in bryce If you looked at my last post and saw my ughhhhh! mountains you might agree this is far better I like my tree and I also learned some new controls like the small barge like "thingy" under the tree do you? ( I hope lol) it's a bryce rock: ________________________ I took it into psp8 after it was all done and enhanced it (see bottom one) I like the top one ! what do you think? thanks for all your comments good or bad or indifferent

Comments (14)

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Ruthee

1:32PM | Sat, 14 January 2006

OUTSTANDING! You are doing well in Bryce. I don't know if I'll ever get back to that program. I like both of your images. But I love to see sunsets.... ALWAYS! :)

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inkev1961

4:40PM | Sat, 14 January 2006

Wonderful work Evie! Your doing terrific in Bryce! Super colors and love the water too. E & V

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Blush

5:44PM | Sat, 14 January 2006

Your doing great with this program Bryce sis I wish I had it to learn how to do images like this I love them both...tho I am partial to the green one Vote n hugs Susan~

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ppetersen

7:30PM | Sat, 14 January 2006

You are coming along so well in this Evie, I'm so proud of you!!!!Love the colors in the top one, a sort of surreal landscape, love them both truely, the sky in the second is delightful, but I like the colors of the terrain in the top one... :) I'm in awe of this Evie, you go girl!!!!

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jocko500

11:40PM | Sat, 14 January 2006

see you playing with the sky and all cool work

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matasabu

12:55AM | Sun, 15 January 2006

I like the top. There is a poetic, a little lonely feeling there. I love that. Very effective lighting of tree. It's great!

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tallpindo

6:20AM | Sun, 15 January 2006

The textures on the tree should go up it vertically (except the leaves, silly!) The cloud shadows may be too stong because they are too low in a scaling that just does not work like that. The rock needs a texture that rolls over it's sides and some chipping to avoid the machined from a steel ingot look. This all happens to each of us in the beginning. Your overall excellent sense of beauty will shake off this wet behind the ears dampness.

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SophiaDeer

6:38AM | Sun, 15 January 2006

A beautiful scene with the most stunning of colors!

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GOLDILOCKSUK

8:13AM | Sun, 15 January 2006

Another beautiful image! Very impressive work and excellent use of lighting. This is gorgeous well done V Cathy

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maud

12:16AM | Mon, 16 January 2006

I like both of your landscapes..for the sky i prefer the second! You did a very good work Evie! :)

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marzo

3:16AM | Mon, 16 January 2006

You're doing great Evie! Like both but prefer the lower one for it's more natural look.

grandma1

7:24AM | Mon, 16 January 2006

Excellent job Evie! Your doing a great job on Bryce. Be proud of yourself!

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davidoblad

7:32PM | Mon, 16 January 2006

Now I'm really impressed. Finally, a full Bryce without any obvious touchup.. Congrats Evie. Now I only have two small suggestions... Like Dale mentions.. Use a different texture on the rock slab to make it look more like dirt.. Ie. Clay. Right now it looks a bit like marble. 2nd.. You must have a light close to the top of the tree. Kill it! Or if the scene is too dark without it.. Move it much higher so it lights up everything evenly. You can set the range on the light to NONE.. turn off the shadows for that light.. and then reduce it's brightness for a natural ambient look to the whole scene. Anyway, except for the funny lighting on the tree top, the whole scene works pretty well in both versions. I know the effort required just to get this far is very significant but please don't give up.. You almost have it perfect. Soon, you will be making fantastic scenes like this (easily) to serve as backdrops or foundations for more complex images if desired. The sky is the limit! Rock-On girl! Your doing super Eve and just keep banging away at it.. Huggles and a big Vote with thunderous applause from Dave :^)

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Silkylady

9:13PM | Mon, 16 January 2006

Evie, you are doing much better. As dave said, the lighting should be up above the pic, to make the whole pic lighter. Keep on trying Hon, for you get better and better...VOTE...Silkylady...