...Farewell... by Syriana
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Description
When the only colour you can see
is the blackness in your heart
and the only thing you feel
the coldness in your mind.
Then all the laughter you hear
turns into a mockery of your life.
Only mistakes are visible
only failures remain.
Doubts confuse your thoughts
insecurity becomes your world.
The sky forever out of reach
the earth always to hate.
Sadness fills your eyes,
you drown in fear.
Why should you hold on
when all you do goes wrong?
Hope and strength broken
and shattered around you.
The blade in your hands,
a pale light, inviting to use.
A paper on the table before you,
you are prepared
to let what it says come true...
... Farewell ...
Comments (4)
PhrankPower
As I was reading this I was thinking, oh-oh, damn, I can identify with this. But Im sure there will be an encouraging message by the end. I should keep reading. I could use an uplifting moment. But surprise! Guess Ill have to get that encouraging moment elsewhere! But this really drew me into it. I feel like I was watching someone. Nice work!
SusiQ
This is a perfect image of someone who has noone for encouragement. Take time, people, to look around at those in your area. Give where you can even if it is a smile. So sad to be so alone.
Wolfspirit
I totally agree with SusiQ, and thank you for sharing too. Keep writing.
vaggabondd
you have a very dark side to your writing. I can relate to it. :) keep up the good work