SPARKLING STAR IN THE SKY by vaggabondd
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SPARKLING STAR IN THE SKY
TELL ME THE TRUTH
IN A LIE
TELL ME HOW I REALLY AM
BUT DON
Comments (2)
NothingNess
Excellent writing! I love this line "TELL ME THE TRUTH IN A LIE".
Touchstone_Fire
That's certainly true to human nature; "Tell me the truth in a lie." This poem really resonated with me. BUT DONT LET MY PRESTIGE BE DAMNED However, I don't think "damned" flows right in the poem. I would personally change it to "damaged." I think it flows better. Anyways, nice work:)