Nudity by SusiQ
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A little poem inspired by a huge critic of mine...
My mirror.
Hugs to all!
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Nudity.
Those bare limbs that hurt my eyes
That cellulite I can't disguise
Those bulging rolls of cultured fat
If only I could get rid of that.
The mirror just hates it when I am nude
It thinks that I am being rude.
When I turn from left to right,
It wishes I would get out of sight.
Oh how I wish I could be thin
Only a little bit more slim
Then I wouldn't feel quite so shy
and maybe I could meet a guy.
Some call me cuddly, full of curves
Softly plump with no reserves
An hourglass figure and big soft hips
Smiling eyes with rosy lips.
But then I stand in front of that
Meany mirror that calls me fat
And so I crawl back in my shell
And live my life in my quiet hell.
Comments (14)
LilyBean
nice trick
drace68
Get a smaller mirror! Well, not really - what does inanimate glass know? But no matter how slim, most women won't like their reflected image - fact. However, the average male looks in mirror and sees a person of character, possibly even handsome in a certain light. Thoroughly deluded most guys push on. It's not fair - another fact. -- Dick
eternalwytch1
I know that feeling. I despise mirrors...
Shabetei
I enjoyed the read, so nicely formed and a meaning everyone can relate to in many aspects. Me, I prefer funhouse mirrors. ;o)
STEVIEUKWONDER Online Now!
Must admit, my mirror in the bathroom, skulks whenever I get near it, lately! Hahaha! Lovely work Sue. Excellent! Steve :o)
PeeWee05
And how ugly are mirrors that are in clothing shops! With that flourecent light?! Excellent discriptions! But what woman is happy with her body? By fault of the media!
6T6
This is temporary. Look through the glass. You are beautiful.
Bothellite
Mirrors lie. They only tell the truth when they are attached to the side of a vehicle. You better trust them, then. Otherwise they only fill your scope with dither unless you happen to love yourself unconditionally -- which happens to be a human rarity. I agree with drace68 -- get a very small mirror that only shows your eyes -- the important part.
SusiQ
LoL. thanks for all the suggestions and comments. I find if I forget to clean the mirror, it gets a layer of dust that softens the bulk and the wrinkles too. Quite a nifty use of dust... Have a great day all.
AGentleMuse
I know the feeling and you have expressed it so well here!! Excellent!!
NothingNess
Remember that beauty is in the eye of the beholder. :)
SusiQ
Hey! I just found a new way to alter the image in the mirror and it's not called a diet. I found glass paint and have painted a mural over the mirror, so even though I get a distorted image of myself, it is still a work of art. lol. I am getting to love myself again but my self image took a hard knock after the divorce. It takes time. Hugs to all!
FireTemptress
This is an AWESOME poem........ wow.... expresses the feeling so well. The urge to accept yourself and feel pretty, and then the harsh reality the mirror deals. Great job!
femalien
WOW! I laughed my head off reading that! How true it is! Indeed, oru worst critic is the mirror and mine is merciless. Here's to all the women on a diet or jogging, or doing fitness or whatever. Let's stick together, read this poem, have a laugh and get very slim soon!