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Alone

Writers (none) posted on Feb 07, 2006
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The mirror glares back at her. Red rimmed eyes. Purple weeping wounds. Blood mixed with tears. Blood mixed with hopes. Blood mixed with dreams. Blood mixed with hope. Hope. Fuck hope. She reaches for the towel, closing her eyes. She can hear him in the other room. She is Clara. He is Tom. He did it again, just then. He was rage itself when he had a few drinks inside him. Rage about anything, even the smallest things. Why couldn

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lahavana

4:28AM | Wed, 08 February 2006

excellent piece of writing, my friend... disturbing and well-written. well done!

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Bothellite

2:40PM | Wed, 08 February 2006

Excellent style and perfectly put forth. A story retold over and over again with renewed emotional grip each and every time. A pleasure to read!!

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Moebius87

8:14AM | Thu, 09 February 2006

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant writing... this is terrific work, my friend. The story is all too often repeated, sadly... but you express this so powerfully. The shifting point of view is extremely well handled and as a reader I find myself pulled both ways. Well done.


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