Life by vaggabondd

Writers • (none) • posted on May 19, 2006

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Drum Drum Drum Everyday it beats Stronger Closer Pounding in my ear Wearing me down chewing me up Spiting me out Everyday It pulls me closer to the grave The funny thing is It has beat me up So bad For so long I

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Razor42

5:01AM | Fri, 19 May 2006

Drum Drum Drum It beats on ever stronger everyday its longer The only thing we have to fear is fear it'self - nameless, unreasoning, unjustified, terror which paralyzes needed efforts to convert retreat into advance." Be a rock and those you care about will find shelter in you.

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SusiQ

6:25AM | Fri, 19 May 2006

Don't be afraid of living, the life that is 'wearing you down' is just shaping your soul into something beautiful. Interesting poem.

9:39AM | Tue, 23 May 2006

Nice continuity... nice rhythm! Every line is "Drum"-- concise, one beat. You are giving a beautiful voice to many who don't know what to say. You remind me of an old, dear friend of mine who was experimented on by Dr. Mengele.